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the game is not so bad, but the level design can be improved. you started immediatly with an hard level. Start easy and increase the difficylty. check out this tutorial/video:

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Just noted that you made this game with Pocket Platformer. To run it online, you have to name it as index.html and to put it in a zip file. The you have to upload the zip file here.