The only thing that bothers me, judging on frequency of updates. I wish you release full version and I see it's RPG Maker MV, so about that time you should have a full version, unless you trying to make up with regular hob?
This game is so far the best game made with RPG Maker, even though it is very ascethic look and uses default assets the main plot is very interesting and the battle with final boss in demo is very intense. It took me 5 hours to finish demo, but it was the best 5 hours. :)
the plot and the design is good. What is your bad point? the rtp. you have to replace it using custom resources and your players will grow up. i am sure about this